The Earthquake Detector
Earthquakes are issues for a lot of countries around the world. The goverment and NGO work to slove these problems.
Disaster can't stope by can manange with prediction and preparation it. Besides of the knowledge of safety hazard while earthquakes to save ourselves and important things. The most important thing to have to antisipation it is a detector which gives information if any earthquakes comes.
The earthquakes detector will give alert to people if earthquakes happening, they need to save their selves.
It will be so much help to a company or people in residential area to have this mechine.
We will give good price for you, only for 100 first buyers.
Contact me for mor information and free consultation.
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You described the issue in a good manner. Just a little more emphasis on sentence structure and spellings, otherwise You wrote it really well.❤
ReplyDeleteYour way writing is good and also content good
ReplyDeleteThank you Naveen.
DeleteAnissa, you described very well but some correction is needed which are
ReplyDeleteEarthquakes are issues
A lot of countries
NGO work to solve
Can't stop
Manage with prediction and preparation
Knowledge
Safety
Anticipation
Which gives information
Happening
Help for a company
Thank you Ritibha
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